Why I'm Still a Good Transfer Candidate

Tips that help explain low grades and other problems

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Not meeting all the “To Do’s for Transfers” will require additional explanation and convincing an admissions committee to keep your application out of the “No” pile. 

Your “Personal Statements” and “Letters of Recommendations” explains who you are beyond the grades.

Tell a good story (Possible themes)

•   Underdog (Mitigating circumstances):  “I worked 30+ hours week and carried a full load to support myself/my family of three/my low income family.” 

• I climb mountains  (Good character,  virtues, ethics, values): “Tragedy dropped my grades when my child/mother/grandmother got (medical condition) and required my help to….”

•  Life happened:  “I lost my job, was homeless, got pregnant, etc.., but I ….”

Bottom Line:  Explain what happened, how it affected your academics AND how you worked to overcome it.

Avoid

• Personal (needless) confessions: “I’ve always had low self-esteem…” 

•  Come to Jesus moment:  “I discovered I REALLY wanted to study and help mankind…”

•  Begging: “I promise to be the best student you’ll ever have”.  Don’t go there, you'll only sound desperate.

Letters That Testify for You

Faculty endorsements carry the most weight.  People who can testify about your academic skills especially in your major are given extra weight.

• Best:   Writers that document relevant coursework taken, mastery of particular knowledge and skills, earning high grades, and affirmations of your intellectual abilities and maturity.  Explains any problems or “hiccups” in your records.

•  Good:  Some of the above but not as extensively

• Weak:  Few of the above and focuses mostly on your personality.

"From Juan Gonzales, Chair, Journalism Department, CCSF"

 

 Name Dropping and Helpful Titles

Ideally, writer should be from (in this order): Department Chair, Major Faculty, Faculty, and Academic Counselor

A “Name” or “Celebrity” is useful only if they are affiliated with academia or speak about your character.  E.G., A college department chair, a business manager, or athletic coach - The higher the title of the writer, the greater the impact of their letter.

Avoid: Family members, best friends, co-workers (unless they have a helpful job title)

Information beyond the transcript

Your Personal Statement and Letters of Recommendations “fill in” what your grades don’t completely tell.  They’re information about how successful a person you are.  Your character, work ethic, ability to overcome obstacles, and how you have used your time, makes an impression on the admission reader.  Hopefully, it’s enough to put you in the “Further Review” and not “No” pile.